A couple days back, Chris Nedin at Ediacaran posted an excellent blog discussing Richard Dawkins’ Mt. Improbable analogy. As a means of commenting, I had cut and pasted a copy with my thoughts interdispersed here - Improbable Mountains in the Landscape.
As shown in the the comments section of that blog, Chris subsequently provided clarification and comment as a followup.
As a re-comment followup, I have posted the below thoughts as a new blog. A new blog was required because what I lack in substance I try to makeup for in shear bulk.
Chris,
I enjoy reading your writing, and many thanks for the time spent clarifying your point at my blogsite. I sincerely appreciate your patience in talking me through the analogy and your perspective of it, but – I struggle still…
POINT 1
I’m still not quite grasping the implication of the peak as an evolutionary cause rather than its consequence – or, as guiding? Do you mean that because a peak ends at a tapered point it gives the erroneous impression that the adaptation (or, increased “allele concentration”) is being filtered, dwindled or refined to a single individual as opposed to merely becoming more prevalent in the population?
[When I referred to an “end point” in my initial comment, I meant the expression in a similar sense as that used by Payne (see your “Told ya so”) when he mentioned a “pre-existing evolutionary potential.” In other words, the idea of an organism approaching a wall or limit in its available genetic range or plasticity.]
My gut feeling is that you’re viewing allele concentration as increasing towards adaptation/specialization and therefore being better symbolized by an expansion or widening as oppose to a taper? Sort of like this image:

I realize that I’ve eliminated a dimension from the landscape in this crude sketch; however from this graphic I can see a couple or your points illustrated:
1- Fitness decreases as allele concentration increases
2- Novelty would arise from the Generalists
3- Generalists exhibit the most fitness
In addition, the “pit” could be visualized as the area beneath the slope of the allele frequency (increasing towards adaptation, as you suggest); and the “peak” would be found at the maximum of the allele concentration (at the widest/deepest point of the pit).
e.g.

Beyond the images being overly simplistic and rudimentary, if the above likenesses accurately depict the fundamentals of the “pit” analogy- in terms of process only, I would only disagree with you regarding the y-axis. (I’m sure you saw that one coming.)
As an alternative, if we flipped the y-axis upside and let it represent increasing fitness (currently it’s displaying the inverse of fitness “1/Fitness”) the following would occur:
1- Novelty would rise from small populations (less fitness)
2- The “peak” would represent greater levels of specialization
3- The greater levels of adaptation would be found in the most fit populations
Such an alternative version would be more to my liking.
POINT 2
I think our disagreement regarding the peak as being “stagnant” or required as a prerequisite for adaptation is more-or-less a difference in interpretation of the intent of Dawkins’ analogy. I’m viewing the peak as occupied by an organism/population struggling to adapt to a fluctuating environment but being handicapped by genotypes inherited from ancestral lineages - a balancing act between inheritance and current selective pressures.
The organism is “handicapped” because its ancestors had struggled with a past environment that would have been different than the current one; ecologically different as measured by degree – all ecosystems undergo transition; for example a Coastal Grassland typically transitions into Flatwoods. Yes, major extinction events and catastrophes occur (with dramatic effect, often testing the breaking point of plasticity), but in terms of probability and frequency these are second to more gradual (not “slow;” rather step-by-step) changes.
In this sense, there is no pre-existing environment towards which an organism strives, it works with what’s at hand, AND, when probability succeeds in achieving sufficient “allele concentrations” (achieved through a combination of inheritance and selective pressures, mutation, etc…) adaptation occurs. With this adaptation resources become more readily available and relative fitness improves; thereby increasing the probability of greater allele concentrations (positive phenotypes) in future generations – a positive feedback. (Don’t want to get off on a tangent here, but remember that most feedbacks have delays)
Fitness must be increasing on the above y-axis! Otherwise nothing (regardless of the process that brought it to existence) becomes fixed.
POINT 3
Last point, I promise - Acquisition and loss of alleles and/or phenotypes…
Firstly, let me reemphasize that I interpret the “peak” as being representative of any given organism’s (or population’s or species’) current state of existence; the total and complete sum of its current condition. I do not interpret the peak as perfection or as a driver; it’s just a place marker.
Secondly, let me restate that “Phenotypes are not pro-actively reduced to a vestigial state; rather they’re no longer actively maintained. There’s no longer a pressure for the original phenotype to be preserved.”
If there is no active reducing, and they’re no longer actively maintained, then there is little or no “dead allele weight” to serve as baggage. Active change (adaptation) in the presence of selective pressures (of any variety) requires energy expenditure; inactivity and stasis are a bargain by comparison.
For example: Going back to the two fish example; let’s sat that there are two fish, one with well formed, fully functional eyes, the other with poorly functioning eyes. Both fish reside in a dark cave environment that has been stable for a reasonable amount of time. But then, suddenly - the environment changes!
The water temperature rises by half of a degree – that’s substantial change in an aquatic environment!
How could either fish be said to carrying extra baggage or dead allele weight? Yes, the fish with full eyesight may now need to work towards thermal tolerance, but it doesn’t need to work towards blindness or eye loss! In fact, both fish will now need to move towards thermal tolerance and I’m willing to wager that they both are under other pressures as well. They may be “working towards” elongate tactile whiskers and improved lateral line systems; they may be “working towards” the ability to produce sound (grunting) to attract mates… There could be numerous adaptations that one or both fish are “working towards.”
From this example we could say, “Given the totality of the circumstance, I think the fish with poor eyesight is better adapted to the dark warm cave.”
We couldn’t say, “The fish with poor eyesight is more evolved.”
We couldn’t say, “The goal of the fish with functional eyes is to become blind.”
Most importantly, we couldn’t say, “The better adapted fish is at an evolutionary dead end - and is doomed.”
As an alternative, if we flipped the y-axis upside and let it represent increasing fitness (currently it’s displaying the inverse of fitness “1/Fitness”) the following would occur:
1- Novelty would rise from small populations (less fitness)
2- The “peak” would represent greater levels of specialization
3- The greater levels of adaptation would be found in the most fit populations
Such an alternative version would be more to my liking.
POINT 2
I think our disagreement regarding the peak as being “stagnant” or required as a prerequisite for adaptation is more-or-less a difference in interpretation of the intent of Dawkins’ analogy. I’m viewing the peak as occupied by an organism/population struggling to adapt to a fluctuating environment but being handicapped by genotypes inherited from ancestral lineages - a balancing act between inheritance and current selective pressures.
The organism is “handicapped” because its ancestors had struggled with a past environment that would have been different than the current one; ecologically different as measured by degree – all ecosystems undergo transition; for example a Coastal Grassland typically transitions into Flatwoods. Yes, major extinction events and catastrophes occur (with dramatic effect, often testing the breaking point of plasticity), but in terms of probability and frequency these are second to more gradual (not “slow;” rather step-by-step) changes.
In this sense, there is no pre-existing environment towards which an organism strives, it works with what’s at hand, AND, when probability succeeds in achieving sufficient “allele concentrations” (achieved through a combination of inheritance and selective pressures, mutation, etc…) adaptation occurs. With this adaptation resources become more readily available and relative fitness improves; thereby increasing the probability of greater allele concentrations (positive phenotypes) in future generations – a positive feedback. (Don’t want to get off on a tangent here, but remember that most feedbacks have delays)
Fitness must be increasing on the above y-axis! Otherwise nothing (regardless of the process that brought it to existence) becomes fixed.
POINT 3
Last point, I promise - Acquisition and loss of alleles and/or phenotypes…
Firstly, let me reemphasize that I interpret the “peak” as being representative of any given organism’s (or population’s or species’) current state of existence; the total and complete sum of its current condition. I do not interpret the peak as perfection or as a driver; it’s just a place marker.
Secondly, let me restate that “Phenotypes are not pro-actively reduced to a vestigial state; rather they’re no longer actively maintained. There’s no longer a pressure for the original phenotype to be preserved.”
If there is no active reducing, and they’re no longer actively maintained, then there is little or no “dead allele weight” to serve as baggage. Active change (adaptation) in the presence of selective pressures (of any variety) requires energy expenditure; inactivity and stasis are a bargain by comparison.
For example: Going back to the two fish example; let’s sat that there are two fish, one with well formed, fully functional eyes, the other with poorly functioning eyes. Both fish reside in a dark cave environment that has been stable for a reasonable amount of time. But then, suddenly - the environment changes!
The water temperature rises by half of a degree – that’s substantial change in an aquatic environment!
How could either fish be said to carrying extra baggage or dead allele weight? Yes, the fish with full eyesight may now need to work towards thermal tolerance, but it doesn’t need to work towards blindness or eye loss! In fact, both fish will now need to move towards thermal tolerance and I’m willing to wager that they both are under other pressures as well. They may be “working towards” elongate tactile whiskers and improved lateral line systems; they may be “working towards” the ability to produce sound (grunting) to attract mates… There could be numerous adaptations that one or both fish are “working towards.”
From this example we could say, “Given the totality of the circumstance, I think the fish with poor eyesight is better adapted to the dark warm cave.”
We couldn’t say, “The fish with poor eyesight is more evolved.”
We couldn’t say, “The goal of the fish with functional eyes is to become blind.”
Most importantly, we couldn’t say, “The better adapted fish is at an evolutionary dead end - and is doomed.”